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Try to get what i lose
Hey, you there! I'm studying English seriously, I really want to learn the language more deeply because I have the dream of studying abroad and I am on the way to get the chance.
I failed at the final stage of selection at the student exchange programs. [Not sure if I understood this sentence correctly...]
I have sacrificed a lot in order to get into the program, but I had to fail in the final stage because I was not good at English. So, I want to learn English more deeply to have my revenge on me.
My desire to make friends with people from other countries should be delayed but that is okay, I get to know you here.
by the way my name Lintar, I am Indonesian. My life takes place and I live in a small town in a southtern Sulawesi province.
You like to learn Psychology, the power of mind, the power of dreams or everything about dreams? If you do, we'll be good friends ...
[I hope my corrections are OK. Honestly, I did not understand the whole text fluently, but I hope my interpretation wasn't too far from what you wanted to say :) ]
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