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Introducing myself I am learning English, because I want to study abroad. My native language is Russian, and I grew up in Russia. I like extreme sports and active rest. I enjoy snowboarding and diving.

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What Neil said about the comma after "English" is correct. In Russian, it is obligatory to use a comma before "потому что" but we do not have such a rule in English.
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You don't need a comma after the word "English". Other than that, your introduction is written perfectly. I had never heard the phrase "active rest" before, so I looked it up, and now I understand the concept.

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