Decisions

Sometime we have to decide some things in our lives. About study, job, friends, loves, life in general! I am not a anxious girl. On the contrary, I am quiet and patient. However, quiet people can be anxious in some moments of the life. The important thing is to keep calm and to trust in yourself. It is also important to share troubles with friends and family who can to help.

[Good work.]

Decisions

Sometimes we have to decide some things make decisions in our lifes lives. About For example concerning study, job work, friends, loves love, even life in general! I am not an anxious girl, on the contrary, I am quiet and patient. But quiet people can be anxious in some moments of in the life. The important thing is to keep calm and to trust in yourself oneself. Also to share Sharing troubles with friends and family can to also help.

Decisions

Sometime we have to decide some things in our lifes. about study, job, friends, loves, and life in general! I am not a anxious girl, on the contrary, I am quiet and patient. But, quiet people can be anxious in some moments of the life. The important thing is to keep calm and to trust in yourself. Also, to sharing trouble with friends and family can to help.

Great job!

Decisions

Sometimes we have to decide on some things in our lifes lives.Such as studies, job, friends, loves & life in general! I am not an anxious girl.On the contrary, I am quiet and patient. However, quiet people can be anxious in some moments of life. The important thing is to keep calm and trust yourself. Also sharing trouble with friends and family & doing what you can to help them is important.



well done!!
I was just trying to improve the flow of your sentence pattern.
good job. :)