Essay on technologies and relationships
Nowadays people tend to use advanced technologies more and more extensively in their everyday life including ones which influence the way of communication and building relationships. There are various examples of this trend in everyday life, and we can see the results, both positive and negative, by ourselves.
To begin with, the major impact is made by the Internet and social nets, which are developing faster and faster and becoming more common. If you look at modern generation, you can see that an account in a social net is a must-have thing now. As a result, people spend more and more time communicating by short messages instead of talking by phone or face to face. Many people now are so adjusted to express their thoughts in a short written way that they start to have difficulties with real communication; therefore, it can be considered as one of the negative sides of changes in relationships. However, the social nets have also affected the interaction between people in a positive way. For instance, people become more open to each other, they share their private life with their friends and it unites them and put closer to each other.
The other way development of technology and the Internet affects people relationships is that there is growing popularity of matching sites, helping people to find a person to build relationships with. It can be considered as a controversial change, as from the one hand it gives people more chances to meet a person they would love, while from the other point of view, these relationships are often very short, not leading to life-long feelings. Moreover, these sites nowadays are occupied by a lot of malicious people, that resulted in the necessity to be more careful.
Finally, the Internet and programs like Skype gave the opportunity to talk to people separated even by long distances. It is increasingly important, because it enables people to communicate easily with their relatives and friends and make relationships stronger. What is more, nowadays we can communicate with people all over the world and find friends in different countries. Consequently, it broadens our network of contacts and make the interaction more diverse.
To conclude, undoubtedly, modern technologies play a great role in the way people communicate with each other and the impact on relationships can hardly be underestimated. There are both positive and negative sides of these changes; nevertheless, in my opinion it is a natural process which we have to adju
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Yes, next time I will make it shorter :)
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The writing is at a pretty advanced level of English, with a few wrong words here and there, misplaced commas, cases of losing the subject in long sentences etc. Argument-wise you make a few unsubstantiated general statements. You probably want to make your essays shorter; that way people are more likely to correct them - that's my experience anyway.
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There are both positive and negative sides of these changes; nevertheless, in my opinion it is a natural process which we have to adjust to, and make the utmost of the new opportunities for improving our relationships.
I would like to hear your comments about my essay as a writing task, coherence&cohesion and my mistakes. Does it sound natural?
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