life is like a song
Every bad thing will be fine ,the blue mood has all gone .This term will be end ..since 9 .1 i can study a lot of knowledge in the school and i make a lot of friends in the new class .My new classmates is very friendly and kind of me .I am be a mounitor in my class because I can get on well with others classmates and we made fun with each other or study knowledge together.when we ware tired i was suggested sing songs so that made ourselives relaxed . I was very enjoyed in it . All the time is my happenniess time ,I think life is a song ,sometime we ware laughing or smiling sometime we ware crying and down.do you think so ?
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life is like a song
Every bad thing will be fine, the blue mood has all gone. This term will be end. Since 9 .1, I can study a lot of knowledge in the school and i make a lot of friends in the new class. My new classmates is very friendly and kind to me. I will be a monitor in my class because I can get on well with other classmates and we made have fun with each other or study knowledge together. When we were tired I was suggested singing songs so that made to make ourselives relaxed. I was very enjoyed in it. All the time is my happy time. I think life is a song - sometimes we are laughing or smiling, sometimes we are crying and down. Do you think so ?
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