This Weekend
There is only one month left before the lunar new year. I began to feel the noisy atmosphere of the last few days of this year.
This morning, on the way to work, I came across several pots of flowers bought on the street. The cold of winter along with the hurried pace in Saigon made me feel mixed anxiety.
Being busy with my studies, I haven't yet had the adequate time to swing by discount stores, then pick some clothes up for my family members. What a shame!
I will spend this weekend finding some discount clothes. The weekend will be available to do my uncompleted things.
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This Weekend
There is only one month left before the lunar new year. I have begun to feel the noisy atmosphere of the last few days of this year.
This morning, on the my way to work, I came across several pots of flowers bought on the street. The cold of winter along with the hurried pace in Saigon made me feel mixed anxiety anxious (or you can use "mixed emotions").
Being busy with my studies, I haven't yet had the adequate time to swing by discount stores, then and pick some clothes up for my family members. What a shame!
I will spend this weekend finding some discount clothes. The weekend will be available to do my uncompleted things.
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Your grammar and vocabulary are impressive! "Began" vs "have begun" is confusing for a lot of native English speakers as well (http://www.usingenglish.com/forum/ask-teacher/3323-began-vs-begun.html). It was VERY easy to understand your journal though. If I was just looking for grammatical mistakes, that would have been the only comment I would have made because technically, I think the rest of the journal is correct. The only reason I made additional corrections is to let you know how the phrases are more commonly said where I live (Texas, USA). Other English speakers form different parts of the world may have different opinions though.
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