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Please find below my corrections for your cover letters. I wanted to make it flow a little bit better for you without losing what you wanted to say.

Covering letter

First covering letter :

Currently in 1st year of BTS International trade, I am in search of a company in Scotland to be able to carry out a one 8 weeks minimum duration training course in the field of the prospection and the follow-up of customers. 12 weeks in maximum.
The objective of this training course is to develop my commercial experiment with international in order to enabling me to continue my studies in this particular field.
This anglophone experiment is important for me, that would enable me to acquire professional competences but also to return in contact to the international level.
In the long term, I aim at of candidater on a station V.I.E. (International Voluntariate in Company) in Scotland. The main mission of this training course will be to nourish the file of analysis and control of operations of international commercial prospection.
The objectives will be to develop competences relating to the prospection customers. This prospection could be carried out towards a third country, on the foreign national market or possibly towards France.

I thank you for the attention which you will pay to my candidature.

Second covering letter :

Graduate of a baccalaureat in Sciences and Technology of Management option marketing, I prepare an Advanced vocational diploma in International trade. It is about a training in two years which requires training course a one minimum duration 4 weeks, not remunerated and officially agreed.

My primary role being to prospect customers on the international market. That consists in seeking outlets for trade on the national market and/or international. Moreover, I should find prospective customers, communicate with them thanks to my linguistic abilities (to be in regular contact, to make sure of a good follow-up customers). Eager to develop, enrich and diversify my capacities, I subject to you my candidature for a post of trainee.

Having worked in various fields, I acquired a capacity of adaptation as well as a relational ease. The various experiments in the industrial field as in baby-sitting enabled me to acquire autonomy, rigour and the capacity to be worked in group.

I wish to profit from new experiments and know-how. Justified, determined and conscious of the importance of the commercial trades especially to international, I will bring rigour, serious and fills with enthusiasm in a team. My principal motivation being to be recognized like an added-value within your company.


The curriculum vitae, herewit

Corrections:

First cover letter : 

Currently in  my 1st year of BTS international trade, I am in search of a company in Scotland to be able to carry out one 8-week minimum, 12-week maximum training course in the field of the prospection and maintaining of customers. 
The objective of this training course is to develop my commercial experience with international business in order to enable me to continue my studies in this particular field. 
This Anglophone experience is important for me, in that it would enable me to acquire professional competences but also to return with contacts on the international level. 
In the long term, I aim to be a candidate on a V.I.E. station (International Volunteer in Company) in Scotland. The main mission of this training course will be to nourish my understanding of analysis and control of operations in international commercial prospection. 
The objectives will be to develop competences relating to prospective customers. This prospection could be carried out in a third country, on the foreign national market or possibly within France. 

I thank you for taking the time to consider my candidacy.  

Second cover letter : 

Graduate of a baccalaureate program in the Sciences and Technology of Management Marketing, I’m currently preparing an advanced vocational diploma in international trade. It is a two-year training program that requires training courses of at least 4-weeks, not remunerated and officially agreed upon.

My primary role being to find prospective customers on the international market, I will seek outlets for trade on the national and/or international markets. Moreover, I will find prospective customers, use my linguistic abilities to communicate with them and remain in regular contact with them to ensure quality customer service. Eager to develop, enrich and diversify my capacities, I submit to you my candidature for the post of trainee. 

Having worked in various fields, I acquired a capacity of adaptation as well as an ease of relation with others. These various experiences in the various fields, such as in baby-sitting, enabled me to acquire autonomy, work ethic and the capacity to work well in a group. 

I wish to profit from new experiences and knowledge. Justified, determined and conscious of the importance of commercial trade especially on an international scale, I will bring rigor, determination and enthusiasm to your team. My principal motivation is to be recognized as a valuable addition to your company. 


 Curriculum vitae herewith attached.