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An unforgettable experience today When it was about 9 o`clock in the evening, my roommate received a call and was informed that one of my classmates disappeared. He left a tip about life and death.All of us were so worried and guessed there were something wrong with him and he might be dangerous now. Soon we all went out to look for him. Since our school was near the Qiantang river, some of us went to the side of the river. I had a bicycle, so I rode it along the river. There were no lights there and the river was really dark. I shouted his name but no one answered. After a long ride, I could still not find him. Fortunately, when I was about to ride in the opposite direction, my roommate called me and told me he was found. I was about to cry when I heard this news. On the way I returned to my dormitory, I realized that the wind was really cold and the darkness was definitely horrible. In fact, it was a misunderstanding. He was studying in the selfstudy room and the tip was just nothing. He just wrote down some words from the web. Anyway, he is safe now and it is the best news.

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An unforgettable experience today

When it wasAt about 9 o`clock in the evening, my roommate received a call and was informed that one of my classmates disappeared. He left a tipnote about life and death. All of us were so worried and guessed there werewas something wrong with him and he might be in dangerous now. [dangerous => a danger to others]
Soon we all went out to look for him. Since our school was near the Qiantang river, some of us went to the side of the river. I had a bicycle, so I rode it along the river. There were no lights there and the river was really dark. I shouted his name but no one answered. After a long ride, I could still could not find him. Fortunately, when I was about to ride in the opposite direction, my roommate called me and told me he washad been found. I was about to cry when I heard this news. On the way I returnedback to my dormitory, I realized that the wind was really cold and the darkness was definitely horrible.
In fact, it was a misunderstanding. He was studying in the self-study room and the tipnote was just nothing. He just wrote down some words from the web. Anyway, he is safe now and itthat is the best news.

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