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I learned a lot! I learned, who don´t search you don´t miss you and, who don´t miss you don´t love you. I learned that life decides who enter in your life but you decide who stay in it. I learned that truth hurts only once and lie always hurts. So, appreciate who appreciate you and don´t treat as a priority who treats you as an option...who hurts you makes you strong, who criticizes you makes you important, who envy you makes you valuable...

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You are doing great!

 

Here are a couple different ways you could express this thought

I learned, who don´t search you don´t miss you and, who don´t miss you don´t love you. I learned that life decides who enter in your life but you decide who stay in it.

 

I have learned, people who don't search won't find. If you never miss you never love. I learned fate decides who comes into your life but only you decide who stays.

 

I know know, If I don't look at all I am bound to overlook some.  Everyone who has found love has lost it a few times before. I have learned that life brings many people to your door but only you have to power to open the door.

 

 

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I learned a lot!

I learned, who don´t search you don´t miss you and, who don´t miss you don´t love you. I learned that life decides who enter in your life but you decide who stay in it. I learned that truth hurts only once and lie always hurts. So, appreciate who appreciate you and don´t treat as a priority who treats you as an option...who hurts you makes you strong, who criticizes you makes you important, who envy you makes you valuable...

 

I learned that those who don't look for you don't miss you and those who don't miss you don't love you. I learned that life decides who enters your life but you choose who stays. I learned that the truth hurts just the once but lies hurt forever. So appreciate those that appreciate you and don't treat as a priority those that treat you as an option. Allow those who hurt you to make you stronger, those that criticize make you more important and those that envy you make you more valuable....

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who is usually connected with the third person (he, she, it) and applies for persons, so it should be followed by verbs with -s at the end, e.g. who does not /doesn't search you you can also use it with those who..., it is not necessary to say only those that. I was only surprised that what you wrote here is actually true, but sometimes people don't have time to search for you and they still keep you in mind. ...appreciate who appreciateS you..., / you see you wrote it correctly in the part... a priority who treatS you...
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hey! Nice!! but needs quite some improvement! but good going :)
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I learned a lot!

I learned that those who don´t search for you don´t miss you, and that those who don´t miss you don´t love you. I learned that life decides who enters in your life, (or "comes into your life") but you decide who stays in it. I learned that the truth hurts only once and a lie always hurts. So appreciate people (or "appreciate those") who appreciate you, and don´t treat someone like a priority who treats you like an option...whoever hurts you makes you strong, whoever criticizes you makes you important, and whoever envies you makes you valuable...

 

If "Who" is used at the beginning of a sentence, then the sentence must be a question. For example: "Who are you?" is correct. "Who goes home." is not. 

 

 

 

 

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