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finally,I get a new offer From july,2012,I gave up a job in bank and moved to Suzhou from Jinan for my boyfriend.A long time for a new job!Many times I was lost,I felt despress,I doubt my ability.In China,many parents want children to work in bank,goverment,hospital.they think these places can offer a stable life.My panrents also hope so.But I want to find a job relying on myself,and no matter how the result is,I will admit it.It's my choose.Not only for my boyfriend,but also for myself. Finally,I get the new offer.I think my parents should give me more confidence and they should believe me that I can do better.

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Finally, I get got a new offer

From In July 2012, I gave up a job in at a bank and moved to Suzhou from Jinan for my boyfriend. A long time for a new job! It's been a long time without a job. Many times I was felt lost, I felt depressed, and I doubted my abilities. In China, many parents want their children to work in at a bank, in goverment, or at a hospital. They think these places can offer a stable life. My parents also hope so. But I want to find a job relying on myself, and no matter how what the result is, I will admit it.*  It's my choose choice, not only for my boyfriend, but also for myself.
Finally, I get got the new offer. I think my parents should give me have more confidence in me and they should believe me when I say that I can do better.

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