First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hey !

I want to improve my English because I want to work in another country. I like  scandinavian countries.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hej !

I want to improve English because I want to work in another country. And I like like scandinave country.

Hej ! Hey!(1)

I want to improve my (2)English because I want to work in another country.

And (3)I like like Scandinavian(4) countries (5)

1 The exclamation is spelled this way

2 It is your English you want to improve so you need the possessive pronoun

3 Never start a sentence with 'And'

4 Spelling error of adjective

5 You need the plural of country as there are more than one Scandinavian countries.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hey !

I want to improve my English beacuse I want to work in other country and  I  also like scandinavian countries.
OR

I want to improve my English to work in other country. Beside these, I also like scandinavian countries.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hey !

I want to improve my English beacuse I want to work in other country and  I  also like scandinavian countries.
OR

I want to improve my English to work in other country. Beside these, I also like scandinavian countries.