My New Year tree
My New Year tree is very beautiful! It is artificial. On its is white and blue balls, icicles, one beautiful snowflake, two wonderful fairies , reindeer, tasty sweet, sea horse and multi-colored lamps. Under the New Year tree is Father Frost. He sings a song about small tree. In evening my father includes multi-colored lamps and the New Year tree sparkles! It is very beautiful!
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My New Year tree is very beautiful! It is artificial. On its ARE white and blue balls, icicles, A beautiful snowflake, two wonderful fairies , reindeer, tasty sweetS, A sea horse and multi-colored lamps. Under the New Year tree is Father Frost. He sings a song about A small tree. In THE evening my father includes multi-colored lamps and the New Year tree sparkles! It is very beautiful!
Watch out the articles, I understand that it could be difficult for you because in Russian are not articles, you are very understable, just make an effort with the articles ))
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Very nice!!)))...and only 1 correction...it should be tasty sweets..not tasty sweet..
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