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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I want to improve my english skills, especially in oral conversation in order to be more at ease and to work easily within an international company/environment. My native language is French and I'm currently living in Paris. I enjoy playing guitar, drinking beers, and also speaking with new poeple!

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I want to improve my English skills, especially in oral conversation my spoken skills in order to be more at ease and to work easily within an international company/environment.

My native language is French and I'm currently living in Paris.

I enjoy playing guitar, drinking beer, and also speaking with new people!

 

Great work! I changed "in oral conversations" to "my spoken skills." This is because, it is typically understood that a conversation is done orally. Moreover, "spoken skills" is a lot broader, which would also include pronunciation! I also changed "beers" to "beer." This word is usually kept in the singular form unless you are expressing a specific quantity. I hope this helps!

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Pierre said: Hi avi, thanks a lot! I'm playing both electric and acoustic. But accoustic is my favourite! Correction: "I play both electric and acoustic guitar." Also, note Breönté corrections below; he's right! Who (what guitar players) do you like? Mel.
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Hi avi, thanks a lot! I'm playing both electric and acoustic. But accoustic is my favourite!
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Hello there! perfect English..(thumbs up :) ) Do you play acoustic or electric guitar?

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