Back in time 2002-2006

Soon I will be 18 ... but I'm still not to understand why I am! I did not want to leave the convent.Only there I felt that I do not live not for nothing.Ya felt sense of life to all things ... I was still 14 when I had to make a passport and residence permit for a of the convent. But a month until the passport is issued so swallow up me into the philistine life, that I did not notice the beginning of going to college.same not noticed the left this refuge teenage.
it's true, I'm afraid people in the world.I studied to art shcool ,engaged in judo,played the piano and sang in the School of Music.I got bored..all material science and art did not cause my interest.at this time I appear real friends first.very smart)

Back in time: 2002-2006

Soon I would be eighteen... but I still did not understand who I was or why I was here.  I did not want to leave the convent because only there had I sensed a purpose in my life... a feeling that I was somehow connected to all other things.

I had been only fourteen when I'd gone about obtaining a passport and residence permit that would allow me to live at the convent.  And during the month until the passport was issued I had become so swallowed up within my philistine lifestyle that I had not even contemplated the significance of beginning college or of giving up the family refuge typically enjoyed by the more-normal teenager.

It was true... I was afraid of people and of the world at large.  Although I'd studied at art school, engaged in judo, played piano and sang at music school, I'd eventually gotten bored by it all.  I'd come to realize that material things -- even those linked to science and art -- could not maintain my interest.

At about this time real friends began appearing in my life as never before --a new and very smart development!... :)

Back in time 2002-2006

Soon I will be 18 ... but I still do not to understand why I am here! I did not want to leave the convent. Only there I felt did I feel that I do not live was not living for nothing. Ya  I felt sense of life to all things ... I was still 14 when I had to get make a passport and residence permit for a of the convent. But a month until the passport is issued so swallow up me into the philistine life, that I did not notice the beginning of going to college. same not Also, I did not notice that I had the left this teenage refuge teenage.
It's true - I'm afraid people in the world. I studied to at art school, engaged in judo, played the piano and sang in the School of Music. I got bored - all material science and art did not cause catch my interest. At this time I appear real friends appear for the first time.  Very smart.)

[Good work.  Put a space after the periods and commas.]

Back in time 2002-2006

Soon I will be 18 ... but I'm still not to understand why I am! I did not want to leave the convent.Only there I felt that I do not live not for nothing.i felt sense of life to all things ... I was still 14 when I had to make a passport and residence permit for the convent. But a month until the passport is issued so swallow up me into the philistine life, that I did not notice at the beginning of going to college.I did not notice when left this refuge when I was a teenager. 
it's true, I'm afraid people in the world.I studied at art shcool ,started judo,played the piano and sang in the School of Music.I got bored..all material science and art did not interest me.at this time I make friends first.very smart)