An experience to buy the train ticket

The winter holiday is coming. I have to buy my train ticket in advance so that I can return home on time. 
So this afternoon,_I did it. It`s was (remember your tenses!) so cold today due to the recent snow._I took a bus to the train ticket office. When I got off the bus, I was astonished that there were so many people waiting in the line. I thought I would not get my ticket until it was dark. Anyway,_I did not give it up. I slid to the end of the line. Soon my I loste the control of my feet, and my hands are were freezing cold. What made me pleased was that there was no wind today. 

It was lucky that I saw the ticket window after more than 2 hours. When I was about to get my ticket, I saw two foreigners had coame to buy the tickets, but they had went to the wrong window. The ticket seller could not speak English, while the two foreigners could speak only a little bit of Chinese. The seller told them her window sold only bus tickets_(she said it in Chinese), but the two said they wanted to go to sShanghai and that they could not understand what the seller was telling saying (you could also write "the seller was telling them"). Finally, they left pitifully. Later I got my ticket and raun to catch them. Fortunately I overtook them. I explained to them that why they could not buy the ticket. And I also advised them to come again tomorrow morning to get the tickets tomorrow morning because it was too late today and that there were still too many people waiting for the tickets. 
It`s my first time to help foreigners, and I feel so happy today! Their smile made me forget the coldness I suffered today.

Great read and cute picture. You're a very nice person, Keith. I wish you all the best.

A experience to by "of buying" the train ticket

The winter holiday "vacation" is coming. I have to buy my train ticket in advance so that I can return home on time.  (老觉得return念着不顺，你问问别人？我的意见是，go home.下面有用蓝色字体标的出于相同的困惑或者有更好的选择。也希望你找到正确答案了可以告诉我:)) 

So(so用作连词才表示“所以”，副词没这个意思。副词表示这么，e.g. so much) this afternoon,I did it. "Thus I bought it this afternoon." It`s "was" so cold today due to the recent snow.("latest"也许会更好。) I took a bus to the train ticket office."train station" When I got off the bus, I was astonished that there are "were" so many people waiting in the line. I thought I would not get my ticket until it was dark. "I was afraid that I could not buy the ticket until it was dark." Anyway,I did not give it up. I slid to the end of the line. ", and I wait in the end of the line. "Soon my lose the control of my feet and my hands are freezing cold. "It was freezing cold outside. Soon my feet were benumbed and my hands were cold."   What made me pleased was no wind today.  "Luckily, there was no wind."

It was lucky that I saw the ticket window after more than 2 hours. "Finally, after waiting for more than 2 hours, I got closer and saw the wicket. How happy I was!" When I was about to get  “buy” my ticket, I saw two foreigners came to buy the tickets but they went to the wrong window. I saw two foreigners go to wrong wicket when I was about to buy my ticket. The ticket seller "conductor" could not speak English while the two foreigners could speak only a little Chinese. The seller "conductor" told them her window "she" sold only bus tickets (she said it in Chinese), but the two said they wanted to go to shanghai and they could not understand what the seller was telling "her". Finally they left pitifully. Later I got my ticket and run to catch them "up". Fortunately I overtook them. I explained to them that why they could not buy the ticket. And ", and" I advised them to come again to get "buy" the ticket"s" tomorrow morning because it was too late and there were still many people waiting the tickets "in line". 
It`s my first "time" to help foreigners and I feel so happy today! Their smile made me forget the coldness I suffered today.

A experience to by the train ticket

The winter holiday is coming. I have to buy my train ticket in advance so that I can return home on time.
So this afternoon,I did it. It`s so cold today due to the recent snow.I took a bus to the train ticket office. When I got off the bus, I was astonished that there were so many people waiting in the line. I thought I would not get my ticket until it was dark. Anyway,I did not give it up. I slid to the end of the line. Soon my lose the control of my feet and my hands are freezing cold. What made me pleased was no wind today.
It was lucky that I saw the ticket window after more than 2 hours. When I was about to get my ticket, I saw two foreigners came to buy the tickets but they went to the wrong window. The ticket seller could not speak English while the two foreigners could speak only a little Chinese. The seller told them her window sold only bus tickets(she said it in Chinese), but the two said they wanted to go to shanghai and they could not understand what the seller was telling. Finally they left pitifully. Later I got my ticket and run to catch them. Fortunately I overtook them. I explained to them that why they could not buy the ticket. And I advised them to come again to get the ticket tomorrow morning because it was too late and there were still many people waiting the tickets.
It`s my first to help foreigners and I feel so happy today! Their smile made me forget the coldness I suffered today.