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My purpose My purpose is improve my english skill. I have read some books writed in english, but I need change experience with other persons. I studied english 15 years ago, but I think that forgot it all. I will became happy, if somebody could help me. I purpose help somebody in portuguese too. I'm civil engineering in Brazil.

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My purpose

My purpose/goal is to improve my english skills. I have read some books written in english, but I need to exchange experiences with other people. I studied english 15 years ago, but I think that I forgot it all. I would be happy if somebody could help me. I want to help somebody in portuguese too. I'm a civil engineer in Brazil.

 

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Dear Robério,

     Here is my correction:

     My purpose is to improve my Englsih skills. I have read a number of books written in English, but I need to share my experiences with other people. I studied English 15 years ago, but I think that I have forgotten all of it. I would be quite happy if someone would/could help me. At the same time, I can help someone learn Portuguese. I am a civil engineer in Brazil.

 

O meu querido Robério,     

     Eu ensino português em Israel mas desde que ele não é minha lingua mãe, eu sempre pode melhorar-me. Assim, gostaria muito trocar licões e idéas com você.

     

 

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at41 gave the ideal way of structuring your statement, but I also provided a few simpler corrections in case it came across a bit unclear :)
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O meu querido Robério, A sua correção de Alexea é claramente certa, mas me pregunto mi mesmo se ela não seja formal de mais? Se no Brasil a gente não usaria uma lenguaje muito mas colorida e animada? Em quanto a Alexav, querria indicar que em Portugal se diz: "Estou a aprender", não "Estou aprendendo". abraço Alan Traister, Israel

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