I agree with Ms Help, (Estoy en acuerdo con Ms Help) if you like, just read my notebook on introducing myself in Spanish to help you get a head start or an idea on what you were meant to write: http://www.italki.com/notebook/entry/12096.htm#.UOiZfW_tR68 I don't want you to copy it but use for yourself as an example.

Translate what you have written into Spanish. If you are very new to the language it would help if you find a tutor and/or use online learning materials and then practice what you've learnt on here. I will send you some online materials you might find useful

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning spainish ,because i want to go abroad and make friends from spanish speaking countries. i have some friends in Venezuela. Spanish is the language i need to know to comunicate with them. my native language is Madrine Chinese, and i grew up in China. I enjoy playing pingpang and volleyball. Hope we can become friends and teach each other a new language. I am sure it will be fun ! Good luck!