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First notebook entry: Introducing myself i am a college student and learning English. i want to make friends from other cuntries to improve my English level My native language is Chinese dance,music,travel around,read……my hobby is very widespread i hope can make the sincere friend!

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i hope can make the sincere friend!

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I think the idiom you are looking for in the last line is:

 

I sincerely hope I can make some good friends!

 

[... and ALWAYS capitalize that pronoun ' I ' ]

 

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a college student and learning English.

I want to make friends from other cuntries to improve my English level.

My native language is Chinese.

dance, music, traveling, reading……my hobbies are very widespread

i hope i can make a sincere friend!

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