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Happy new year I wish you a happy new year and the best for 2013 : Love, Happiness, Money and Health of course ! Yesterday, for the first day of the year, I prepared a lunch for my family with some shrimps, lobster and whelks. It was a kind party...I like to share unforgettable moments with my family. The day before, we went to disneyland paris and we found a restaurant with Disney characters.So we took some pictures with my sons, they were amazed and very happy. One of my friend (thank you Eric) laughed of me because I often visit Disneyland Paris...I know it seems to be a little bit childish...

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Happy new year

I wish you a happy new year and the best for 2013 : Love, Happiness, Money and Health of course !
Yesterday, for the first day of the year, I prepared a lunch for my family with some shrimps, lobster and whelks.
It was kind of a party (do you mean to say the celebration was similar to a party? Its unusual to describe a party as "kind")...I like to share unforgettable moments with my family.
The day before, we went to disneyland paris and we found a restaurant with Disney characters. So We took some pictures with my sons, they were amazed and very happy. One of my friends (thank you Eric) laughed at me because I often visit Disneyland Paris...I know it seems to be a little bit childish...

 

You're never to old for disney land!! :D

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