My First Day Of 2013
These days the weather are all pleasant , so I decided to have a walk on this afternoon,.when I arrived the park ,I saw many cute children playing in the guass,with a great smile,and their parients standing nearly them.In this moment,I missed my mom,I wantted now I was in her arms.
I continued to move forward , Suddenly,I found a smooth lake ,and there were sever boats on the lake ,I remenber I was rowed with my classmates ,it was a so happy time .
I think today I thought a lot about past ,hope I will have a better life in the new year :)
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My First Day Of 2013
These days the weather are all is pleasant , so I decided to have a walk on this afternoon. When I arrived the park, I saw many cute children playing in on the guass grass,with a great smiles,and their parients standing nearly near to them.In At this moment,I missed my mom,I wantted wished (that) I was in her arms.
I continued to move forward , Suddenly,I found a smooth lake ,and there were several boats on the lake. I remenber I was rowed with my classmates ,it was a so such a happy time.
I think today I thought a lot about the past ,hope I will have a better life in the new year :)
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