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I lost my iPhone last week. I attended company's Xmas party last week and I drank almost one bottle of Vodka, then I went to a live house by walk by myself. I have bad habit that I want to walk when I drunk. I was walking and enjoy night wind. Suddenly, two girls come to near of me and say something but I couldn't understand what they said. They have gone after 1 minute, then I understood that they stole my iPhone. Oh my god! Two girls were robber! Please change it to English that sounds more natural.

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Oh.I drank a cup of beer and felt headache one year ago.Now , I never drink beer as well as alcohol.
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Thanks for correcting. Have you ever be dead drunk?
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I lost my iPhone last week.

I attended my company's Xmas party last week and I drank almost one bottle of Vodka. Then I went walked to a live house by walk by myself. I have a bad habit that I of wanting to walk when I'm drunk. I was walking and enjoying the night wind. Suddenly, two girls came to near of to me and said something but I couldn't understand what they said were saying. They have gone left after 1 minute. Then I understood that they had stolen my iPhone. Oh my god! Those two girls were robbers!

Please change it to English that sounds more natural.

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What a pity! i think two girl will be punished by god.

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