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Forrest Gump I cleaned my job place until afternoon today. Then I went to the book store to look for some books and bought a English book,That is Forrest Gump. My friend recommended me to watch this movie. Then I was impressed,When I watched this movie. So,I was pleased to find this book and decided to buy it smoothly. I'll enjoy reading and using it to my learning.

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Forrest Gump

I cleaned my job place until this afternoon today.
Then I went to the book store to look for some books and bought an English book. That The book/It is Forrest Gump.

My friend recommended me to that I watch this movie.
Then I was impressed when I watched this movie.
So, I was pleased to find this book and decided to buy it smoothly/without a second thought/without hesitation.

I'll enjoy reading it and using it towards my learning.

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"I'll enjoy reading it and using it to learn English." Actually, take out the word "again". You have not read the book yet, right?
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Forrest Gump

I cleaned my desk at work job place until thru this afternoon today.

I cleaned my workplace job placeuntil this afternoon today.

I cleaned my workplace job place until this afternoon today.

[Depends on context of what, and when, you cleaned]


Then I went to the bookstore to look for some books and bought a English book (written) in English, That is "Forrest Gump".

 
My friend recommended me to that I see watch this the movie(, too).

Then I was impressed,When I watched this movie.
I watched it and was impressed.

So, I was pleased to find this book and decided to buy it right away smoothly.

I'll enjoy reading it again and using it to my learning learn English.

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I enjoyed reading it and using it to my learning learn English.

 

Nice job!

 


 

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