在险峰-In the Mountains!!
假期后，我开车穿过山区回家。那里下着小小的雪，非常漂亮.
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在险峰-In the Mountains!! ( 险峰 means dangerously steep mountain, so I think "在山区“ is a better translation for " in the mountians")
假期后，我开车穿过山区回家。那里下着小小的雪，（那里下着小雪 or 那里下着细细的雪）非常漂亮. 。
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@zerlinda “那里下着细细的雪。”and “那里下着小雪。” are correct.“ 那里下着小小的雪” is not good.
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cool
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hi, Alex! after seeing the following corretions of your little text, I feel they are just finding fault with you. there is no need to change "非常" into "煞是". "煞是" is used in ancient Chinese which is the language used before the new China(nearly before 1945). we usually use "下小雪","下小小的雪"is okay, but we don't say"下细细的雪". their corrections are not in accordance with oral Chinese. i don't want you to be misguided. by the way, your little passage is good!
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在险峰-In the Mountains!!
假期后，我开车穿过山区回家。那里下着小小的雪，非常漂亮.
「小小的」不能用来形容雪，可以改成「细细的」。其他都非常不错^_^加油哟^_^
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