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Hey Kaa,
You did well on this entry, just a few things to take note of. Also, a few times I didn't know what you wanted to say.
I have marked the places in yellow so you can see them:
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Good morning!
Hello,here in Brazil it is morning.So ,good morning! I'm very interested in the new year.It isn't so far (I don't know what you mean?).Each time we are always making some plans and a lot of people just say in their lives: I will change everything next year.But I think they forget that change is so special and it doesn't have to be tomorrow or after tomorrow or just in 2013 at all. ever this is close.
We have to change everyday,step by step,suddently, not very fast but fast enough. We have to be polite,help people and take care of about our health everyday.We can say good things all the time. We don't have to wait for certain dates because even without these dates we are living and we only live once!If you want say somehing,just say it now!
Good vibrations!Kisses! (I don't know what you mean good vibrations? But I understand kisses! kkkk)
Good morning!
Hello, here in Brazil right now, its early in the morning. So, good morning! I'm very excited about the new year. It isn't that far. Every now and then we are always making some plans and a lot of people just say it for their lives: I will change everything about myself next year (New Year's Resolutions). But I think they forgot to value that change that is so special and it doesn't have to be tomorrow or the day after tomorrow or just in 2013 whenever this is close.
We have to change everyday, step by step, sudden changes, not that quick though but just enough. We have to be polite, help people and take care of our health everyday. We can say good things all the time but we don't have to wait for those special dates because even without these dates, we are living our lives and we only live once! If you want say somehing, just say it now!
Good vibrations!Kisses!
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