new year
the time is so fast 2012 will come to the end on the new year I will be 22 years old in china on this age we can get married Now I realy feel I am an old man so I must work more hard for my future
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New Year
Time has gone by so fast; 2012 will come to an end on the new year. I will be 22 years old. In China at this age we can get married. Now I really feel I am an old man, so I must work harder for my future.
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