I wanna start to learn English from 2013...我要从2013年开始学英语

When I was 24 years years old, I started to learn Chinese.

When I just first started Chinese, I met a girl who studied English on QQ. Although she couldn't speak Japanese and I could just only speak some newbie words, but she patiently taught me Chinese.
Sometimes she corrected my pronounciation on voice chat. Sometimes we would also sending e-mails and she would corrected my grammar.
I guess if I didn't meet hadn't met her, I wouldn't would've given up a long time ago.

2013 will come soon. I must go to the next level. I swear to you I will study English very hard！

我24岁时开始学中文。
我刚开始学的时候在QQ上认识了一个学英文的女孩，虽然她一点都不懂日文，我也只会讲最基础的几句，但她很耐心地教我中文，有时候语音聊天纠正我的发音，有时候写电邮纠正我的语法上的错误，如果没有她我应该早就放弃学的。
2013年要开始了，我要进下一个阶段，对你们发誓我努力学英文！

I wanna start to learn English from 2013...我要从2013年开始学英语

when I was 24 years years old, I started to learn Chinese.

when I just started Chinese,I met a girl who studied English on QQ,although she couldn't Japanese,I can just speak some newbie word,but she patiently taught me Chinese.
sometimes she corrected my pronounce on voice chat,sometimes we also sending E-mail and she corrected my grammar.
I guess If I didn't meet her,I wouldn't give up long ago.

2013 will come soon,I must go to next level,I swear to you I study English very hard！

我24岁时开始学中文。
我刚开始学的时候在QQ上认识了一个学英文的女孩，虽然她一点都不懂日文，我也只会讲最基础的几句【换成 几句最基础的中文 会更好一点】，但她很耐心地教我中文，有时候在语音聊天中纠正我的发音，有时候写电邮来纠正我的语法上的错误，如果没有她我应该早就放弃学的【学习了】。
2013年要开始了，我要进下一个阶段，对你们发誓我要努力学英文！