Introducing myself

I'm suleyman. I'm studying at collage in Kütahya. I'm an engineer. I want to practice my english with you. Can you help me please?

I'm Suleyman and I'm a college student in Kutahya. I am an engineer. I want to practice my English with you. Can you please help me? 

You did very good Suleyman just make sure to always write the first letter of your name with a capital S.