summer's hot
 

Summer coming now.the sky clear sometimes.the rain falling sometimes.its very hot when the blue sky clear.I goes to bathroom three times in a day.iInever willing the body sweat in the room, cuz the sweat make my mood so bad.the feeling of fidgety make me undecied what to do .


(ok i'm going to correct it the closest i can to what you where saying without adding any different words)

Summer is Hot

Summer is coming. The sky sometimes is clear and sometimes is full of rain. When the sky is blue and clear it is very hot. I take a bath three times a day. I don't like having sweat on my body. Sweat makes me be in a bad mood. The feeling fidgety makes me indecisive on what to do.

(How i would write it)

Summer is Hot
Summer is fast approaching. I can always tell because the sky changes. One day it may be clear, sunny, hot and beautiful but another day it may be gloomy, rainy, sad, and dark. During these summer days I usually have to bathe about three times a day. I strongly dislike the feeling of sticky sweat against my hot skin. Whenever I am sweaty I tend to become grumpy, cranky, fitgety and always be in a bad mood. Feeling fitgety makes me indecisive and lazy; I never know what I want to do.

The Summer is Hot