make the sweater useful
today,the temperature is going on decrease in many places of china,specially,at the sounth of china,it reached under 10 degree.since it entered winter,I haven't taken on the sweater yet,but today,I have to take on my thick sweater to pretect winter,that keeped in the suitcase so long,from now on , the thick sweater was maked useful at last ,because at ordinary times,in the sounth of china, few people take on sweat!
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Hello! Great Job! There is a number of possibilities to use depending on who you would want to say this to. Meaning just chit chatting with a friend, or talking with your boss, or using it for a essay for school. I would suggest to work on spelling, punctuation, and grammar. Also, think about working on structuring your sentences better. I hope this helps!! My correction if below. :)
Nicole
Making the Sweater Useful
In China, the temperature will decrease in many places today, especially in sounthern China. It has dropped 10 degrees since we have entered winter. I haven't worn a sweater yet, but today I will need a thick one to protect me. I have kept the sweater in my suitcase for a long time now. Normally in southern China, you do not need a sweater. Finally, I can now make good use out of this sweater.
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