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聖誕節快樂 Marry Christmas 只希望你們聖誕節快樂,也新年快樂。 Merry Christmas and a Happy New Years.

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聖誕節快樂 Marry Christmas

只希望你們聖誕節快樂,也新年快樂。 Merry Christmas and a Happy New Years.

 

只 刪去, 難道別的不祝福嗎?

希望 改成 祝賀

你們 必定是你祝賀的對象 是贅詞

也 改成 並

會更合乎習慣用法

 

祝 聖誕節快樂 並祝 新年快樂

祝 聖誕節快樂 並賀 新年

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聖誕節快樂 Marry Christmas

只希望(If you want to express your blessing, we usually use 祝)你們聖誕節快樂,也(In Chiness , we use 和、以及 to indicate coordinating relation)新年快樂。 Merry Christmas and a Happy New Years.

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Happy New Year!
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我希望你聖誕節快樂,也祝你生日快樂 !

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