My Dream
One of my habits is to writing diary.l often wirte something about my daily life in my diary.like today i do something special or today i make a dicision balabala.always they begin with" Today".and now i make a dicision that is i will travel around the world and look for freedom.
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My Dream
One of my habits is to writing diary.l often wirte write something about my daily life in my diary.Like today i do something special or today i make a dicision For instance, today, I am going to do something special or make a decision.Always they begin with" Today" They always begin with "today".And now I made a dicision decision, which is, I will travel around the world and look for freedom.
1 - the word habit is correctly written, but i think it is better be replaced with 'hobbies'
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I forgot this in my edit, but "balabala" should be "blah, blah, blah..."
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My Dream
One of my habits is to write in a diary. l often write something about my daily life in my diary. For example, Like today I did something special I did today or today i make a decision I made today, balabala (or etc...). Each diary entry always they begins with "Today". And now I've made a decision to that is i will travel around the world and look for freedom.
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welcome u come in my country ! v(^^
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