看了一下Kalyan的修改，觉得他的翻译不是完全正确。。。以下是我的试图:

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hey, I'm max and I'm living in Beijing now.

Btw, I'm a Chinese learning English very hard, really want a partner for my oral English.
I'm a native Chinese with a strong desire to improve my English. I'm looking for a partner to practice my oral/spoken （随便，oral和spoken在这个上下文可交换的）English. 

Guys speaking English, I need you!!

最好只用一个感叹号；超过一个感叹号会让很多读者觉的你不太文化或什么。

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hey, I'm Max and I'm living in Beijing now.

Btw, I'm a Chinese learning English very hard and I really want a partner for practicing  my oral  spoken English.

Guys speaking English, I need you!!

I need the support of the men who can speak good English.

Be formal while asking for help.(Atleast till you are not a stranger.)