melon's notebook entry: Sep 23, 2010
It is foolish to give money to beggars
When you go shopping ,you will find many beggars on the street .They are orders children and disables who are so pitiful that you can’t help giving them money .Giving money to them can show you charity.Therefore in your eyes it is a wise choice to give money to them..
However ,you may not feel so happy if you know most of them beg money by cheating ,in other words they are making use of your sympathy.Some fake beggars are exposed by the newspapers .Actually,they are rich man and some them are even the “the king of beggars “That means there is someone control some beggars who is the team leader .The beggars are “employees”.
Yet,someone argue that beggar is also a kind of job,which also cost someone’s labour and furthermore it is a good job which can make people happy.You can’t deny that people is happy and get satisfaction after they give money or food to beggars.
The truth is that it’s foolish to give money to beggars ,which is a action of telling lies instead of a job.A job should be defined as getting money and payment in a moral way.And then self-satisfaction can also meet by giving money to philanthropy institude ,which can manage the problem of beggars orderly .Because beggars are also the setback of the city’s beauty and order,At last,we ordinary people ought to cease to give money to them in order to decrease their idleness .We hope that they can find some jobs that they are able to do or live a life with the help of the government or charity which can provide them the basic cost of living allowance.
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melon's notebook entry: Sep 23, 2010
It is foolish to give money to beggars.When you go shopping, you will find many beggars on the street. They are orphan children and disabled people, who are so pitiful that you can’t help giving them money. Giving money to them can show your charity. Therefore, in your eyes it is a wise choice to give money to them..
However, you may not feel so happy if you know most of them beg money by cheating; in other words, (alternative: that is to say) they are making use (alternative: taking advantage) of your sympathy. Some fake beggars are exposed by the newspapers. Actually, they are rich men and some them are even the “
Yet, some
The truth is that it’s foolish to give money to beggars, which is an activity of telling lies instead of a job. A job should be defined as getting money and payment in a moral way. (And) then self-satisfaction can also achieved by giving money to philanthropic organisations, which can manage the problem of beggars efficiently. Because beggars are also a setback to the city’s beauty and order, my final point is that we ordinary people ought to cease giving money to them, in order to decrease their idleness. We hope that they can find some jobs that they are able to do or live a life with the help of the government or charity which can provide them with the basic cost of living allowance.
happy holiday :)
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