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A true Story ( Part 3 ) After marriage, Fang had a baby soon, little by little , she finally knew what kind of people Mr Yan was, he was crazy about alcohol and did nothing, she worked hard all day long. She worked on the farm and raised her own baby, however, Mr Yan started hanging out with some girls, because she sold fruits and earned some money, he always bought something nice for other girls, and slept with them, he sometimes was away even at nights. The worse thing was that , as long as he went back, he got mad all the time, at first, he just threw something on the ground, gradually, he hit Fang on her face and then her body, her body was always black and blue, as Mr Yan was tall and Fang was very small, she could not fight back. She said nothing to others , she only thought that might her destiny. One day, Fang sitted in front of the mirror, Mr Yan got mad again, he threw a glass to the mirror, a piece of glass went into her left eye , the blood bled everywhere immediately, after that, Fang lost her one eye forever. She hated her husband more and more each day as time went by. But she never said that, and worked harder and harder. No one saw smile on her face. It was winter, freezing cold, one morning, a piece of news came that Mr Yan died, the reason was that he got drunk again , slept on the ground all night outside and too cold to die. After that, my aunt raised her child on her own, even though , the life was tough, she felt relief as her child grew up day by day. She didn’t remarried again, till the time she left this world. The day his child eventually saw a brilliant smile on her face as he stood in front of her mom’s bed. She died with a smile and at the meantime, the tears fell down from her only one eye …… (to be continued)

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A True Story ( Part 3 )

After marriage, Fang had a baby soon. Little by little, she finally knew what kind of person Mr. Yan was. He was crazy about alcohol and did nothing, she worked hard all day long. She worked on the farm and raised her own baby, however, Mr. Yan started hanging out with some girls. Because she sold fruit and earned some money, he always bought something nice for other girls, and slept with them. He sometimes was away even at nights. The worse thing was that_as long as he went back, he got mad all the time. At first, he just threw something on the ground, gradually, he hit Fang on her face and then her body. Her body was always black and blue, as Mr. Yan was tall and Fang was very small, she could not fight back. She said nothing to others, she only thought that might be her destiny. One day, Fang was sitting (or, "...as Fang sat...") in front of the mirror, Mr. Yan got mad again. He threw a glass at the mirror, a piece of glass went into her left eye. The blood bled everywhere immediately. After that, Fang lost her one eye forever. She hated her husband more and more each day as time went by. But she never said that, and worked harder and harder. No one saw a smile on her face.
It was winter, freezing cold, one morning when a piece of news came that Mr. Yan died. The reason was that he got drunk again, slept on the ground all night outside and was too cold (we call that hypothermia) and died. After that, my aunt raised her child on her own. Even though_the life was tough, she felt relief as her child grew up day by day. She didn’t remarry again_'til the time she left this world. That day hers child eventually saw a brilliant smile on her face as he stood in front of her mom’s bed. She died with a smile and at the meantime, the tears fell down from only one of her eyes.
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Thanks for reading. And I really think that how lucky I am as I live in the modern society.
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tell us the end of this story.. Please.. The real story are more interesting than dreamed story because it is life experience
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Yes, he was indeed bad. If it happened in this era, she was supposed to give him a divorce.
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so bad husband!!!

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