My favorite time of year

While I had been thinking my about my favorite season, I realized that I don't haven't it one. Instead of a favorite season, I have a favorite moments of every season.
In During winter, I like to look at first snow first, then at big, (Положите это запятая здесь потому что в английском, запятая идет между два прилагательного.) beautiful snowflakes.
In During spring, I especially like May because all of the plants are flowering blooming, the nature revives and gives us energy after a cold winter.
In During summer I like to swim in the Volga. I also like to look at lightning while a summer downpour is raining happening. It's very exciting.
In During, autumn I like a when the leaves fall and when the roads and gardens are colored in yellow and red.

You did good.  Keep up the good work. 
 
I don't have a favorite time of year, but I have a favorite moments in every season. What about you?