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could you help me correcting this text? Thank you very much! First of all, I’m interested in being part of Guildhall School of Music and Drama because their goals overlap with many of my career goals. I would like to become a guitar teacher, I know how important is introducing an instrument in a good way for the beginners, and reading about this conservatoire, I feel a high level of implication of the professors at all levels mixed with a lot of resources and opportunities available. I love my instrument, but above all, I love all kinds of creating music, so I also value active teaching about many music styles that will make me able to play concerts without technique or musical genre limitations. On the other hand, I appreciate being involved in other activities, like improving my language skills and reading or studying about different subjects taking as much advantage as possible of any opportunity that a city like London could bring to me. Summing up, what this center offers to me is exactly what I need to broaden my horizons and musical background having the flexibility to explore other subjects, all with the purpose of becoming a good interpreter with the ability to express love to music and an experienced teacher with a lot to convey.

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could you help me correcting this text? Thank you very much!

First of all, I’m interested in being part of the Guildhall School of Music and Drama because their goals overlap with many of my career goals. I would like to become a guitar teacher, I know how important it is introducing to introduce an instrument in a good way well for the beginners, and reading about this conservatoire, I feel a high level of implication of they have superb the professors at all levels, mixed with a lot of combined with excellent resources and opportunities. available. I love my instrument, but above all, I love all kinds of creating music, ( Do you mean you love composing all kinds of music, or do you mean creating all kinds of music by playing an instrument?)so I also value active teaching about many music styles that will make me able to play concerts without technique or musical genre limitations the limitations of technique or musical genre.
On the other hand, I appreciate being involved in other activities, like improving my language skills and reading or studying about different subjects and taking as much advantage as possible of any opportunity that a city like London could bring to me.
Summing up, what this center offers to me is exactly what I need to broaden my horizons and musical background , having the flexibility to explore other subjects, all with the purpose of becoming a good interpreter with the ability to express love (to) of music , and an experienced teacher with a lot to convey (offer).

I hope this helps. It is a complex piece of writting, and I may not have expressed exactly what you wanted to say. I studied in London. It is a great place for students. (But that was a long time ago!)

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