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sick day Today is rian day when i go home the rain is so big and I don't bring the unbrella I was caugut in the rain Now i fell so dizzy I think I am cold Now I know I can't get rain in the winter If GOD can me an other change I'm sure I will bring a big big unbrella I SWEAR!!!!!

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Today is a rainy day. When I go home there's so much rain and I didn't bring an umbrella. I was caught in the rain. Now I feel so dizzy; I think I caught a cold.

 

 

Now I know I can't get rained on in the winter. <If God can change me and others I'm sure I will bring a very large umbrella.>

 

(I'm not entirely sure what you meant by the last sentence, so I'm not too confident in my correction there. Still, I get the general idea of what you're saying; good job!)

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