First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi everybody,  ,,i I am Priya from India. i I am 22 years old. I am not married yet. I am doing my degree in electronics and communication. My hobbies are reading, listening music, watching TV and cooking. I like fiction novels & romantic books too. So, I read every book of Dan brown except Deception point and i I read twilight & new moon. My favorite Indian writer is chetan bhagat. I read many books in my language. I like to see english films very much. I cudn't can't understand the meaning of english films completely and their pronounciation pronunciation is difficult to understand. Help me.

"I" should always be capital.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi Priya. This is only my second correction, so I don't know the best way of doing it  -  I feel I may have been a little heavy-handed. However, your English was easy for me to understand so i thought I would be fussy. I hope it is helpful to you, but if it is not, please ignore it.

Corrections in Blue

The green is just suggestions to make the writing flow better.

Hi everyone.

My name is Priya and I am from India. I am 22 years old and am not yet married. I am studying for a degree in electronics and communication. My hobbies are reading ,listening to music ,watching TV and cooking. I like reading fiction novels, particulary romantic stories. so I have read every book of Dan brown except Deception point and i have read Twilight and New Moon. My favorite Indian writer is the novelist Chetan Bhagat. I have also read many books in my own language, Malayalam. I like to watch English films very much, but I have difficulty understanding the dialogue, especially when the pronunciation is different to that of my English teacher. Help me.