neel 's notebook entry: Sep 22, 2010
有一天，我在地铁站看到一个男孩，他二十岁出头.那时是上午十点左右，所以车厢
内还不太拥挤.那个男孩读著一本书.他全神贯注地看着那本书.几分钟之后，我看见
他哭了.眼泪流湿了他的脸庞.是那本书的内容打动了他吗？我看了看那本书的封面
.那是Denielle steele 写的一本小说.我很好奇竟然有人会因为一本书而流泪，所
以我目不转睛地看着他.忽然，那个男孩看到我在望着他，显得很尴尬.他取出他的
手帕擦了擦脸，站起来去了其他的车厢.
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我觉得你很有趣，有趣的人才会发现有趣的事，好像也有一颗柔软的心 ：-）
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Very interesting. Not to pass judgement or anything, but at least in America, Danielle Steele is considered Chick Lit (books mainly written by women for women), so that might mean your reader is predisposed to easy displays of emotion, again at the risk of generalizing...
http://zeldalily.com/index.php/2010/05/the-growing-merits-of-chick-lit/
From Wikipedia:
The books, often described as "formulaic,"[21] tend to involve the characters in a crisis of some sort which threatens their relationship ... frequently deal with serious life issues, like illness, death, loss, family crises, and relationships.
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你的中文很好
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