Writing practice 1 - Immigration

So many people think that they would not emigrate from their home country for a long time. There are several reasons explaining why they are not willing to leave their country, such as their deep love of home or it being inconvenient to deal with the new culture and language. But for me, I would say "Yes."
I would immigrate to live in another place, but it doesn't mean I don't love my country. There are two reasons that I have for living in another place.
The first thing is that I suffer from a serious atopic dermatitis because of really bad air pollution. I became impatient with one of the worst air quality in the world. That's why I have to move to a place which has good and clean air quality.
Not only the poor air pollution, but the housing is also the other reason that I want to emigrate from my ncountry. There is an extremely expensive housing price in my country. People in my country are living in a tiny and narrow house with a high price.
Also, I think moving to another place where you have never lived before is a kind of life experience. Compared to live in same place, living in a new country is more attractive to me.

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It's been a long while since had a writing practice, and this is my first essay in English here as well.
Your correction helps me to improve my English. :)
Have a nice day.

Writing practice 1 - immigration

So many people think that they would not emigrate never think about emigrating from their home country for a long time. There are several reasons explaining why they are not willing to leave their country, such as their deep love of home or being inconvenient the inconvenience of having to deal with the a new culture and language. But for me, I would say "Yes" that I want to.

Even though I would immigrate to live in another place, but it doesn't mean I don't love my country. There are two reasons that I have for living wanting to live in another place.  The first thing is that I suffer from a serious atopic dermatitis because of really bad air pollution. I became have become impatient with enduring one some of the worst air quality in the world. That's why I have to move to a place which has good and clean air quality.

Not only the poor air pollution, but the housing are is also the other reason that I want to emigrate from my country. There is an extremely expensive housing price in my country. People in my country are living in a tiny and narrow houses with high price that are too expensive.

Also, I think moving to other a place where you have never lived before is a kind of life experience. Comparing Compared to live living in the same place, living in a new country is more attractive to me.

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It's been a long while since I had a writing practice.
And this is my first time writing in English here as well.
Your correction helps me to improve my English :)
Have a nice day.