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troubling thoughts. 厄介な思考。 今月に僕は新しい仕事が始めた。僕はパッケージを提供します。家の前にパッケージを置きにくいです。一部の重いし、大きいし。大変な。 最近、僕は日本語を勉強すぎません。でもお金がほしい。間違え、お金が必要. 今全部を考られはお金です。でも！皆さん約束、頑張ってみます。いい明日といいですが！！ I started a new job this month. I am a package deliverer. Placing the packages in front of people's homes is rather difficult. Some of them are heavy and large. Lately, I haven't been studying japanese to my full potential. But I want money. No, let me correct myself. I am in NEED of money. All I have been able to think about is money. BUT! Everyone, I promise this, I will do my best. I hope that tomorrow will be better. -ロブ

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Thank-you Haru and Ryoko. You both gave comprehensive corrections. My aim is to learn japanese without sounding robotic.
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haruさん、補足をありがとうございました。そうそう、小包とも言いますよね。
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Hello ! When I saw "今月に僕は新しい仕事が始めた。僕はパッケージを提供します。", I thought you started to teach English as a tutor here on italki.com. :)) Because you wrote "I started a new job this month. I offer a package(or packages)" and I thought "package" was an offer for English lesson. :)) As you see Ryoko-san's correction, "package" is 荷物（にもつ）or小包（こづつみ）in Japanese. 新しい仕事、がんばってね！
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troubling thoughts. 厄介な思考。

今月に今月、(or 今月から)僕は新しい仕事がを始めた。僕はパッケージ(荷物)を提供配達(はいたつ)しています。家の前に(or まで)パッケージを置きにくいです届ける ことは 大変です。一部のいくつかは重いし、大きいし。大変な。 最近、僕は日本語を勉強すぎませんあまり日本語の勉強ができていません。でもお金がほしい。間違え、いや、言い直します、お金が必要.です。 

今全部を考られはお金です。If I translate your English directly,今僕が考えられるすべてのことについてはお金です but it's unnateural, so it's better to say今僕が考えられることはお金のことだけです。でも！皆さん僕は約束します、頑張ってみます。いい明日はもっとよくなるといいのですが！！or 明日はもっとよい日になりますように！！ 

 


I started a new job this month. I am a package deliverer. Placing the packages in front of people's homes is rather difficult. Some of them are heavy and large. Lately, I haven't been studying japanese to my full potential. But I want money. No, let me correct myself. I am in NEED of money. All I have been able to think about is money. BUT! Everyone, I promise this, I will do my best. I hope that tomorrow will be better.

-ロブ

 

Hi Rob,

You wrote very well and please keep your study when you have time. Your work seems really tough, so take care and hope we have BETTER DAYS! Bye.

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