Cambodian fishery The high number of the population in Cambodia relay on the fishery of Tonle Sap Lake. But now the quantity of fish in the lake is dicreasing. The prominente cambodian industry is agr

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Cambodian fishery The high number of the population in Cambodia relay on the fishery of Tonle Sap Lake. But now the quantity of fish in the lake is dicreasing. The prominente cambodian industry is agriculture. But the situation is poor. The small land in the agricultural area is making the hervest less. In such a situation, a enough employment has not been made. As a result, unemployers become a fisherman which works at Tonle Sap Lake to sustain their life. Some of them work illeagaly. It results in a decrease in the number of fish in Cambodia. The compatition, therfore, is getting high. Some fishemans who had worked for a long lost the job and it makes their children stay in the house, even though they'd like to go to school. A researcher says, however, that recently the sector of manufacture is developing in Cambodia. Lots of foreign companys have been invested in the cambodian manufacture and it increases the employment more and more.

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Cambodian fishery fisheries

The high number of the population in Cambodia relay on the fishery of Tonle Sap Lake.

A large portion of the Cambodian population relies on the fisheries at TonleSap Lake

But now the quantity of fish in the lake is dicreasing. decreasing

The prominente cambodian industry is agriculture.

Agriculture is a prominent industry in Cambodia

But the situation is poor. The small land in the agricultural area is making the hervest less.

The small amount of farmable land makes for a small harvest.

In such a situation, a enough employment has not been made.

Thus, not enough people find employment through farming.

As a result, unemployers become a fisherman which works at Tonle Sap Lake to sustain their life.

As a result, unemployed people become fishermen which work at Tonle Sap Lake to sustain their life.

Some of them work illeagaly. It results in a decrease in the number of fish in Cambodia.

The compatition, therfore, is getting high.

Therefore, the competition increases.

Some fishemans fishermen who had worked for a long lost the job and it makes their children stay in the house, even though they'd like to go to school.

Some longtime fishermen have lost their jobs, and often their children can not afford to go to school so they must stay in the house.

A researcher says, however, that recently the sector of manufacture manufacturing sector is developing in Cambodia.

Lots of foreign companys have been invested in the cambodian manufacture and it increases the employment more and more.

Many foreign companies have been investing in Cambodian manufacturing and employment has been increasing.

Nice report. Are you working in Cambodia or is this for a class in school ? good luck.

Thank you for your corrections. I hope that Cambodian manufacturing will develop more, so that people can get a job. But no sweatshop!! Thanks.

This was so interesting to read! I know people with family from Cambodia. There were only a few small spelling errors and I edited things to sound a little more professional, since this seems like an educational entry. Thank you for posting, it was well done!!

Cambodian fishery

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The competition, therefore, is getting high. Some fishermens who had worked for a long time lost their jobs and it makes their children stay in the house, even though they'd like to go to school.
A researcher says, however, that recently the sector of manufacture is developing in Cambodia. Lots of foreign companys have been invested in the Cambodian manufacturing, and it increasesing the employment more and more.

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