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When I was sixteen years old, I began to teach maths to primary school students and I earned my first incomes. Later when I was eighteen I was hire to load trucks and lorries. It was a summer job to pay my holidays in every September after I have finished my exams. I was doing this for four years, then I got a job to watch a swimming pool. It was also a summer job. Finally, my latest job, before a professional job, was a trainee at University. In this trainee I made computer programs.
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My first works
When I was sixteen years old, I began to teach maths to primary school students and I earned my first income. Later when I was eighteen I was hired to load trucks and lorries. It was a summer job to pay for my holidays every September after I had finished my exams. After doing this for four years, I got a job watching a swimming pool. It was also a summer job. Finally, my last job before beginning my professional career was as a trainee at the University. In this traineeship I wrote (or developed) computer programs.
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You expressed yoursel well with only a few revisions needed for clarity and fluency. As an American, my changes might be different than your British English writing. Hope I kept your original meaning intact.
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