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Essay Some people think that governments should spend as much money as possible on developing or buying computer technology. Other people disagree and think that this money should be spent on more basic needs. Which one of these opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. The most important thing people use everyday as drinking water when people need to talk someone or make something in the cyber world is the computer. Since human discovered computer, we could create some new thing used in some field such as Industry, finance, Physic, Geography, Health, Economic, Astronomy and Finance when they account some difficult theory so that expert make analyze, make the proper decision and create new technology. In my opinion, Why we have to spend as much money as on developing computer technology like invest into the new business is there are some reasons, related with the demand of society and key of future development. The first reason is some kind of society such as high developed and underdeveloped in the world, requiring improvement of technology so that create a wonderful new world for many people. Thus, what we need a good approach of supply of society needs is to developing on technology by supporting financial AIDS. For example, the USA government always carries on developing of technology to spend about 1.6 trillion dollars every year. As a result, they could make products needed for society demands, such as I pad and I phone. The second reason is we could create a key way of future world development step by step whenever we develop for technology, especially on the computer. Moreover, we could build some good society everybody wants to live since they were a child. For example, many high developed countries spend as much money as on developing on computer technology. The reason why, all modern high a product based on computer technology used specific technology. Thus, those countries interested in computer technology. In conclusion, I hope in the future life will be depended on computer technology. Thus, many high developed country interested in computer technology. Then they start to spend as much money as possible on developing of computer technology.

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Some people think that governments should spend as much money as possible on developing or buying computer technology. Other people disagree and think that this money should be spent on more basic needs. Which one of these opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
The most important thing people use everyday as drinking water when people need to talk someone or make something in the cyber world is the computer. Since human invented the computer we could create some new thing used in some field such as industry, finance, physics, geography, health, economics, astronomy and finance. When they refer to some difficult theory, and make the experts explain, then they can make the proper decision and create new technology. In my opinion, why do we have to spend as much money as on developing computer technology, or invest into a new business? Are there reasons related with the demand of society and which are keys to future development?

The first reason is, developed and underdeveloped societyies in the world, requiring technology improvements to create a wonderful new world for many people. Thus, what we need a good approach, the need of society to develop technology by supporting financial aid.  For example, the USA government always supports developing technology and spends about 1.6 trillion dollars every year. As a result, they could make products demanded by society, such as I pad and I phone.

The second reason, is that we could create a plan of future world development step by step, whenever we develop technology, especially computer technology. Moreover, we could build a great society in which everyone wants to live, even from a young age. For example, many developed countries spend much money developing on computer technology. The reason why, all modern products based on computer technology used specific technology. Thus those countries investing in computer technology advancement, do actually advance the lesser developed countries in an indirect, but slower way.

In conclusion, I hope in the future life will depend on computer technology. Thus, many developed countries interested in computer technology will start to spend as much money as possible on developing of computer technology or any other technology.

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