My morning life

Today is was a sunny day.

it It has rained been raining for three days, but this morning, at six o'clock, when I wake I got up and I looked out of the window, it is was so bright outside ,and I know ,it stop rainning. and I knew that the spell of rain we had been having had come to an end.

After a ten minutes shower, I heard my son's alarm clock singing ringing, then he got up and began to reading his English book;, he reads English for fifteen minutes every day. I often stand beside him as a tutor.

At the same time, my wife is was cooking breakfast for us. today Today, she prepared fried rice, steamed buns, and an onion and spinach soup and onion for us.

when time is seven ten, At ten, my son and I left the house and walked down the stairs ,; he was going to school, and I was going to the office. his His school is about a five minutes walk distance, after After saying goodbye at the school gate, I went on my way to the bus station stop to catch a bus to the office.

the The nearest bus station stop and metro station is are both beside right next to the school, but they are not my selection I actually don't use them;, instead, I should climbed climb a hill then to reached the end of the bus line and take a bus from there., it will take It takes me about twenty minutes, it's my way of getting some morning exercise it is my morning exercise.

now, it is seven thirty, [??]

I can't resist, I'm correcting it this time into the present tense.

My morning life

Today is a sunny day.

It has rained for three days.  This morning, at it is six o'clock when I wake up.  I looked out of the window, it is so bright outside, and I know notice, it stop has stopped raining.

After a ten minutes shower, I heard hear my son's alarm clock singing ringing. Then he got gets up and began begins to read his English book.  He reads English for fifteen minutes every day. I often stand beside him as a tutor.

At the same time, my wife is cooking breakfast for us. Today, she prepared is preparing fried rice, steamed buns and spinach soup and onion for us.

When time is seven ten, At ten after seven, my son and I walked down the stairs, he was is going to school, and I was am going to the office. His school is about five minutes walking distance.  After saying goodbye at the school gate, I went go on my way to the bus station and to the office.

The nearest bus station and metro station is are beside the school, but they are not my selection destination.  I should climbed climb a hill then reached the end of the bus line. It will take takes me twenty minutes, it is my morning exercise.

Now, it is seven thirty.

Sounds like the start of a good short story!  :-)

My morning life

Today is a sunny day.

You can write the whole thing in present tense or past tense, but you should be consistent!  Most of the time, people write about the past in the past tense, but some authors think it is poetic to use the present tense for effect!  My corrections are NOT the only way to do it, but it is one way!

It has had rained for three days.  This morning, at six o'clock, when I wake woke up, I looked out of the window.  It is was so bright outside, and I know noticed, it stop stopped raining.

After a ten minutes shower, I heard my son's alarm clock singing ringing, and then he got up and began to read his English book. He reads English for fifteen minutes every day. I often stand beside him as a tutor.

At the same time, my wife is was cooking breakfast for us. Today, she prepared fried rice, steamed buns and spinach soup and onion for us.

When time is seven ten, At 7:10 (or "At ten after seven") my son and I walked down the stairs. He was going to school, and I was going to the office. His school is about five minutes walk walking distance away.  After saying goodbye at the school gate, I went on my way to the bus station and to the office.

The nearest bus station and metro station is are beside the school, but they are were not my selection destination. I should climbed a the hill then and reached the end of the bus line. It will take took me twenty minutes, it is my morning exercise.

Now, it is seven thirty.

After reaching the end of your story, and correcting it into the past tense, I feel like I would enjoy it more in the present tense to be honest!  It feels like you are taking me on a journey with you.  As I said, it is unusual to write a story in the present tense, but it can be fun.