Music - Listen or Not? SORRY FOR MY ENGLISH

No need to apologise. :) It's pretty brave to ask for feedback. :)

People all over the world are fond of music. They listen to music, they dance to music, and they learn to play musical instruments. Almost everyone has a favourite song; but it is always different. And honestly, I don't know such a any person who doesn't like listening to music.

Music is the best thing to bring people together with the same tastes who like the same sort of music. It reflects our moods and emotions. And What's more, music is of course the perfect way to spend your free time and not to feel bored. It's something like a therapy for people. It helps you to relax, when you're tired. 

Yet music can be a reason for discord between people. Perhaps someone may not like the music you listen to. And Also, excessively loud music can destroy our hearing.

General tip: it's poor English to begin sentences with but and and. These connect statements; they don't begin them.

I hope you liked the wordplay with discord. :)

I think, music is something like a good friend. It's soothes the soul. It's a form of communication! How can it be bad? So, people should listen to music. It's makes our lives wonderful. Music is everything.

Another general tip: you'll have to re-think how you use commas. English has a different approach, so the commas you use naturally in Russian seem unnecessary to us. 

Apart from all that, good essay! :)

Music - Listen to it or Not? SORRY FOR MY ENGLISH

People all over the world are fond of music. They listen to music, they dance to it, they learn to play musical instruments. Almost everyone has a favourite song, but it is always different from the rest's. Honestly, I don't know such a person who doesn't like to listen to music.
Music is the best thing to bring together people who like the same sort of music. It reflects our mood and emotions. Of course, music is the perfect way to spend free time and not to feel bored. It's something like a therapy for people. It helps you relax when you're tired. 
On the other hand, music can be a reason for disagreements with people, if someone doesn't like music you're listening to, for example. Also, too much loud music can damage our ears.
I think music is something like a good friend. It soothes the soul. It's a form of communication! How can it be bad? So people should listen to music. It makes our life wonderful. Music is everything. I agree with you! :D Regards!!