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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am learning English ,beacause I want to study abroad and make friends from foreign countries. My native language is cChinese, and now I currently live and work in bBeijing, ,the capital of cChina. .I enjoy traveling* around the world, ,doing some baking and cooking, ,and also watching American TV series. Welcome to my home! I will enjoy u beingwould like you to be my friends or and a(my)** teacher!.
Rewritten for clarity:
I am learning English because I want to study abroad and make friends from foreign countries. My native language is Chinese, and I currently live and work in Beijing, the capital of China. I enjoy travelling the world, baking and cooking, and also watching American TV series. Welcome to my home! I would like you to be my friend or (my) teacher.
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I have corrected "now" to "currently", as "now" to me suggests a change of state, whereas "currently" simply indicates the ongoing state.
Please watch out for capital letters! They are required in all place names and names of languages in English.
Additionally please take care with punctuation placement. Commas should follow a word and in turn be followed by a space before the next word, e.g. "Tom, Dick and Harry".
* spelled "travelling" in British English
** I think it is unnecessary to repeat "my" here, but it would not be incorrect to include it.
~Nice introduction! Good luck on your English learning journey and welcome to italki! ^^
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am learning English because I want to study abroad and make friends from foreign countries. My native language is Chinese, and now I live and work in Beijing, its the capital of China. I enjoy travelling around the world, doing some baking and cooking and also watching American TV series. Welcome to my home ! I would like you to be my friend or a teacher.
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