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difference between city and countrysaide With the economic development of comuninity,more and more citties have been developed,and many of the citizens can earn more money.however the countryside almost all the same as before comepared with the city's great changes. so i want to write a composition about the diffrernt between city and coungtryside. as is well known to us all the level of thechnolgy and ecnomic in city is highly. so many citizen can earn more money compared with farmer,and can be rich in material life.besaides the medical level in city also have great advantage,and the citizen can get more exhaustive protection treatment.on the contrary if a poor man in countryside become illness, what he need do is to wait the death. what's more ,in my opinin to many girls the city is a shoppingheaven, because there are all kings of merchangdises ,and thy can buy what thy want. allabove, to many students as me .the most attractive is the better education, and we can admited into a great college or university to get the knowledge that we want. however, in my opinion.everything have both sides,although city has many advantage,but its also have disadvantage, the bigger city is ,the more crowded it will be .despite the traffic in city is conwenient,the exhaust from the car make the air pullution.so compared with city,congcryside also have many adwantage countrysaide have beautiful scenery ,and fresh air .its good to the health ,and the most attracted to me is the green food,eyeryone can get the food if he want , above all ,eyeryone in country side can live a relaxed life ,which is the many poeple's dream

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                          difference between city and countrysaide

        With the economic development of comuninity,more and more citties have been

developed,and many of the citizens can earn more money.however the countryside 

almost all the same as before comepared with the city's great changes. so i want to write a  

composition about the diffrernt between city and coungtryside.

          as is well known to us all the level of thechnolgy and ecnomic in city is highly. so many citizen can

earn more  money compared with farmer,and can be rich in material life.besaides the medical level in

city also have great advantage,and the citizen can get more exhaustive protection treatment.on the

contrary if a poor man in countryside become illness, what he need do is to wait the death. 
 
            what's more ,in my opinin to many girls the city is a shoppingheaven,

because there are all kings of merchangdises ,and thy can buy what thy want.

allabove, to many students as me .the most attractive is the better education,

and we can admited into a great college or university to get the knowledge that

we want. 
       
           however, in my opinion.everything have both sides,although city has many

advantage,but its also have disadvantage, the bigger city is ,the more crowded

it will be .despite the traffic in city is conwenient,the exhaust from the car

make the air pullution.so compared with city,congcryside also have many

adwantage 
         countrysaide have beautiful scenery ,and fresh air .its good to the health

,and the most attracted to me is the green food,eyeryone can get the food if he

want , above all ,eyeryone in country side can live a relaxed life ,which is the

many poeple's dream
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