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First notebook entry: Introducing myself i am Sohrab from Tehran, Iran and my native language is persian. these days i am learning English, because i want to continue my studies abroad. i need to someone who help me to improve my listening and writing. i am determined to learn English because it is necessary for my. thanks

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

i am Sohrab from Tehran, Iran. my native language is persian. these days i am learning English because i want to continue my studies abroad. i need anyone who help me to improve my listening and writing. i am determined to learn English because it is necessary for me.
thanks

generally we don't put comma before because. here you have details http://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/when-to-use-a-comma-before-because

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Sure, I can help you. You help me with learning Persian.

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