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My older sister and me :) I have an older sister, her name is Erna. She is 3 years older than me. She was born on October 1992 and I was born on Mei 1995. When she was about 8 years old and that time I was 5 years old, she never let me followed her when she went to her friend's home. I was so sad, but I always followed her although she kept babbled me. Sometimes we fought, sometimes we were so good. ^_^ I remember the sweet memory when we were young, that's when we played with dolls, barbies, and hello kitties together. That time we looked so close. Now, she in college and live so far from home. But we never lost contact, we always connected trough phone and through social web like Facebook. Compare to when we were young, time that we always fought, now we are so close each other :), we laugh together, go to shop together and there are so many things that we do together. And next, I'll be in college soon. Probably I will in the same university with her and live together in same place. ^_^ Hehe... :3

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My older sister and me :)

I have an older sister, her name is Erna. She is 3 years older than me. She was born in October 1992 and I was born in May 1995. When she was about 8 years old and I was 5, she never let me follow her when she went to her friend's place. I was so sad, but I always followed her although she kept scolding me.

Sometimes we fought, sometimes we were so good. ^_^
I remembered the sweet memory when we were young, that was when we played with dolls, barbies, and hello kitties together. That time we looked so close.

Now, she is in college and lives so far from home but we never lost contact. We always communicate through phone and through social network like Facebook.

 

As compared to when we were younger, we are closer now. We do many things together like we laugh, and we go shopping together, etc. 

 

And next, I'll be in college soon. Probably I will be in the same university with her and live together in the same place. ^_^
Hehe... :3

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My older sister and me :)

I have an older sister, her name is Erna. She is 3 years older than me. She was born in October of 1992 and I was born in Mei (May?) of 1995. When she was about 8 years old, and that time I was 5 years old, she never let me followed her when she went to her friend's home. I was so sad, but I always followed her although she kept babbling me.

Sometimes we fought, sometimes we were so good. ^_^
I remember the sweet memory when we were young, that's when we played with dolls, barbies, and hello kitties together. That time we looked so close.

Now, she in college and lives so far from home. But we never lost contact; we always stay connected trough the phone and through social media, like Facebook.
Compared to when we were young, time that we always fought, now we are so close each other :), we laugh together, go to shop together and there are so many things that we do together. (This would sound better if you said...In contrast to when we were young and always fighting, now we are so close to each other....)  The way you wrote it was correct, but it didn't make any sense.
And next, I'll be in college soon. Probably I will in the same university with her and live together in same place. ^_^
Hehe... :3

I hope you do get to attend the same university as her!

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